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IELTS Writing Task 1: Bar Graph Sample 1

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Gross Domestic Product in the UK

The chart shows components of GDP in the UK from 1992 to 2000.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
Write at least 150 words. 


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The bar chart illustrates the gross domestic product generated from the IT and Service Industry in the UK from 1992 to 2000. It is measured in percentages. Overall, it can be seen that both increased as a percentage of GDP, but IT remained at a higher rate throughout this time.

 At the beginning of the period, in 1992, the Service Industry accounted for 4 per cent of GDP, whereas IT exceeded this, at just over 6 per cent. Over the next four years, the levels became more similar, with both components standing between 6 and just over 8 per cent. IT was still higher overall, though it dropped slightly from 1994 to 1996.

However, over the following four years, the patterns of the two components were noticeably different. The percentage of GDP from IT increased quite sharply to 12 in 1998 and then nearly 15 in 2000, while the Service Industry stayed nearly the same, increasing to only 8 per cent.

At the end of the period, the percentage of GDP from IT was almost twice that of the Service Industry.

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Answer 1: 

The graph chart provides the information in percentage about GDP from IT and Service sector industry of the UK between 1992 to 2000.

Overall, In the UK the contribution of GDP from IT and service sector was increasing steadily. Although, IT services showed some fluctuations and outraced approximately double from the service industry in the end of the period.

GDP from IT was about 6.2% in 1992 which is approximately 2.2% more than the service industry. However, the figure showed a gradual increase in 1994 and is still almost 2% more than the service sector. In 1996 the downward trend was observed by about 0.2% less than previous year, and continued to increase till the end of the period, hitting its highest point in 2000 which almost doubled as compared to the service sector.

Percentage of Gross domestic product from the service industry was gradually increased and no fluctuations were observed throughout the years from 1992 to 2000. In 1992 GDP from the service sector was 4% although it increased to double in 2000 to approximately 8.1% but it contributed less than the IT sector in GDP.      
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Answer 2:   .

The chart provides an analysis of GDP in the UK between 1992 and 2000. Glaringly, it can be seen that the IT industry had the highest figures compared with the percentages of the service industry.

In detail, the percentages of both IT industry and service industry increased throughout the time frame. However, while the service industry began at 4% in 1992, the IT industry started at just over 6 percent of the GDP. This difference of 2% was increased widely, since at the end of the period in 2000 the gap between IT industry and service industry was just over 6% in terms of GDP. Except in 1996, the gap between IT industry and service industry percentages was always not less than 1.5%.

On the other hand, the percentages measured allow us to know that both the IT industry and service industry grew continuously over the time frame as part of GDP in the UK. Likewise, these figures show that IT percentage rose sharply between 1996 and 1998 at a rate of almost 2% by year reaching a peak of almost 15% of the GDP at the end of the period in 2000.

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